Sunday, June 1, 2025

As Found Taken From Time Immemorial

As Found Taken From Time Immemorial

Poetry is usually words written new. But poetry can also be words found within another work. One type of "As Found" poetry is "Blackout Poetry" where you take a page and leave a new poem by blacking out the other words on the page. A simpler way is to circle words and connect them into a new poem. Here is one from Book IX of the Odyssey (as you see in the picture):

crown of tales / sings like bitter wine

escape shimmering fame / the gods fatal craving / deep in the heart

sweet homeward voyage /  hardship come no more



 









But the “as found” poem I fashioned here is even more direct. I was reading "Why Homer Matters" and realized there was a poem hidden within the prose. All it needed was a little work. A little help.

Here are words from the author Adam Nicolson, and a verse from Richard Lattimore's translation of Homer's Odyssey.

I hope it spins the magic of words for you, as it did for me.

As Found Taken From Time Immemorial

(These Are Not My Words )

At the dinner, lit with braziers

At the dinner, the epitome of civilization

At the dinner, the best that life can offer

At the dinner, where the bard tells the tale

Odysseus cannot bear the tale

Odysseus connot bear what he now hears

He listens

He melts

The word is snow in heat

The word is sugar in water

The word is a cloud giving up rain

The word is flesh falling from a long dead body

The word is a creature that pines away

The word is a companion it has lost 


As a woman weeps, lying on the body

Of her dear husband who died for his city

Of her husband who died for his people

As he tried to beat off the day of pitilessness

As she sees him lying and gasping for breath

She winds her body around him

She cries high and piercing

She cries while the men behind her

Hit her with the butts of their spears

They lead her away to captivity to work to sorrow

Her cheeks are hollow with her grief

Such are the tears

Odysseus lets fall from his eyes

 

The gods did this     

The gods did this

They spun the destruction of people

For the sake of the singing of the bards hearafter

For the sake of the word

This is the Odyssey

This is the Odyssey

This is the Odyssey

 

Thank you thank you thank you

Adam Nicolson Richard Lattimore Homer

 

January 2021   North Andover, Mass